Love it, nice to see some stop-motion :D
I applaud your bravery, firstly for using stop frame (something slightly outside the course), secondly your choice of theme, and thirdly for choice of models - I think it is safe to say that this is an ‘adult’ interpretation through and through. Overall there are also the right ‘steps’ in your script too, all of which have the right tone and the potential to be ‘mischievous’. These were certainly a good foundation build the project upon.Unfortunately your film reads as more of a ‘pre-viz’ than a final product. Each of the core elements, design, animation, and film making are somewhat underdeveloped – They’re more a first idea instead of the result of a refined design methodology. Whilst I understand that you were deliberately trying to go ‘low-fi’ this hasn’t quite worked – ‘Low-fi’ is an art form in itself and does feature design too. Overall, there are a few too many specific problems to go into detail in this written feedback so instead we will discuss them in your next tutorial. Note: Please post your work in a larger format. Your film is ‘postage stamp’ size at the moment.