Friday, 30 January 2015

Storyboard - Final - Comments/Advice Appreciated

So this is my storyboard, not nearly finished at all, just the start. I am trying to condense the plot so that it doesn't feel too complicated while also not leaving out too many key things. Any comments or advice/improvements would be appreciated.


1 comment:

  1. i think you need to get a bit further in, Max...

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